Script
Kidnapping
Scene
Emily: (Man grabs her
from behind) *gasps* get off me
(Man puts his hand over her mouth)
*Muffled
speech*
Scene
2
Jake: (Voiceover while
he’s looking at pictures of him and Emily)
It’s been two days now since Emily disappeared (pause)
Her mum said she went out with friends and never came home (pause) I’ve tried calling her but there’s no answer (pause) it just goes straight to answer phone (pause)
I just want to know she’s alright and safe (pause) she
use to talk about running away when we first got together (pause)
she had depression but I helped her and I thought she was alright now (pause) she said she was alright (pause)
her family thought it would be a good idea if I set up a page for her disappearance
(hear the
email sound)
Amber: (Email appears –
he clicks on it) (voiceover of Amber’s voice) Hi Jake… my name is Amber
Snow (pause) I’ve seen your page on the disappearance of your
girlfriend, Emily Clarke, and I want to help you (pause)
I’m studying at university in the hope to become a detective (pause) I feel this would benefit me and you if I were to
help out (pause) my number is 07182389562 if you want to call me
to arrange a meeting (pause) understand
if you don’t want any help (pause) but
I’m here if you need any assistance (pause) Amber
Snow
Jake: (picks up phone
and types number) Hi (clears throat) it’s Jake Carter; I’ve just got your message about
helping me find Emily (pause) I was um wondering if you wanted to
meet tomorrow? (pause)
great I’ll see you then
Scene
3
Jake: Amber? Amber Snow?
Amber: (looks and smiles)
Hi
Jake: (sits down) Hi, I hope you haven’t been waiting long?
Amber: No
not at all (pause) thanks for agreeing to meet with me (pause)
Jake: (smiles and nods)
Amber: Why don’t you start by
explaining what happened
Jake: (Voiceover while
they look like they’re talking) so
I started to explain to her what had happened (pause)
she was really easy to talk to (pause) we
were talking for hours all about it (pause) I think
she can help me find Emily
We’ve
been meeting up a lot since (pause) the second time wasn’t planned, I was
walking home from work and we bumped into each other (pause) we stopped and chatted
for a while and planned to meet up again the following day (pause) I told her that she
could come to mine so we could check the page regularly and use my computer and
phone (pause)
I was looking forward to spending more time with her (pause) I
feel really comfortable around her already like I’ve known her for ages
She
came round the next day and we spent hours calling people who know Emily (pause) I
called Emily’s friends (pause) they said that some girl had come over
to Emily and said something and she got annoyed (pause) and because of that she didn’t want to get in the taxi with
the others (pause)
she wanted to walk home on her own (pause) but the strange thing is
that no one knows who that girl was (pause) they said she had blonde hair but that’s
all they saw of her (pause) not that that narrows it down, a lot
of girls have blonde hair
Amber
said I could come round the next day and we could try and find the girl (pause) I
arrived her house and she said that we would go to her room because her
roommate doesn’t like meeting people (pause) we just sat on her bed and searched
the internet (pause)
but we didn’t have much luck because Emily’s friends’ didn’t know
much about the girl (pause) me and Amber have gotten a lot closer
too (pause) when
I’m with her, the pain of Emily disappears for a while (pause) she’s so supportive I don’t
think I could have done this without her
Amber: Let
me know if you find anything?
Jake: I
will, see you soon (walks out door)
Amber: Bye
(closes door
turns around and smiles then walks to the other room)
Scene
4
Man: (voiceover) Jake (pause) my name isn’t important, but I can’t
sit quiet any longer (pause) it’s about you’re girlfriend’s
disappearance (pause
shot goes to FF at the kidnap) Amber Snow is not to be trusted (pause) with
my assistance she kidnapped you’re girlfriend on the 28th of
February (pause)
she said to me that she had to get rid of Emily in order to be with
you and if I didn’t help her do it she’d get rid of my wife too (pause) Amber
and I used to be friends at school and in sixth form (shot goes to Amber in her room) she
found your Facebook profile on her mutual friends list (pause) soon after that she
started following your twitter account and finding out everything about you (pause) once
she found out you had a girlfriend she got really mad and started thinking up a
plan of how to break you two up (pause) she found out through Emily’s friend’s
twitter that they were planning on going out for her 19th and went
to find Emily there (pause) I drove her to the nightclub and she
tried to get Emily to break up with you (pause) she
told her lies and Emily got really annoyed at her and left (pause) but Amber couldn’t stop
there and she made me go with her to follow Emily and kidnap her (pause) (shot
goes to Jake) I wish I could tell you where Amber is keeping Emily
but she won’t tell me (pause) I’m sorry Jake I really am
(Jake closes
laptop)
Scene
5
Jake: (picks up phone and dials Amber)
Amber: Hi Jake, what’s up?
Jake: Hi, can you meet me in ten?
Amber: Um sure, why?
Jake: I’ve found something (hangs up)
Amber: (walks to Jake who’s sitting on the bench) Hi Jake, what did you find?
Jake: I know Amber; you can’t lie to me
anymore
Amber: I don’t know what you mean?
Jake:
I know you kidnapped Emily
Amber: What?
Jake: *interrupts her with a raised voice* don’t try and lie to me Amber
Amber: (tries to grab
Jake’s hand but he pulls away) I
was only doing it for us, I knew once you’d met me you would love me and it’s
true you do, you can’t lie and say you don’t
Jake: Where
is she Amber?
Amber: *distressed* No.. (shakes head) Jake
I won’t tell you.. you don’t need her you have me, I will love you more than
she ever will
Jake: (takes Amber’s hand)
*gentle voice* listen to me Amber
I won’t leave you, I promise (pause) you’re
right you love me more than Emily, just tell me where she is
Amber: she’s
um she’s in my basement *looks down sad*
Jake: right
(drops Amber’s
hand) I can’t do this (shakes head and runs off)
Amber: *distressed and
shouting through tears* Jake you
promised (pause) Jake come back please (pause) Jake I love you (runs after him)
Scene
6
Jake: Emily? Emily are you in here?
Emily: *muffled noises*
Jake: Emily?
Amber: (walks into light) Jake
Jake: Amber? What are you doing here?
Amber: I can’t let you throw away what we
have Jake, we have something special
Jake: Amber
we don’t have anything special, we aren’t together, I’m with Emily, I love
Emily, and you have to understand that
Amber: If
I can’t have you Jake, no-one can (walks out of light)
Jake: Amber? Amber don’t (looks around worried
- picks up weapon)
*hits who he thinks is Amber*
Emily: *screams*
*silence for a moment*
Amber: Jake? I think she’s dead
Jake: *drops the weapon and falls to his knees*
Amber: Jake? Are you okay? Jake say
something? Jake? Jake?
Well done a good story and realistic dialogue.
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